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I dunno. What do you think?
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It's very clashy. The visuals, oddly, the sexual based ones more than the weapon mention, are almost.... too blunt? There's just something about it that is lacking the usual ghost-like mystery/beauty of your other work. 

Aside from that, the conflicted nature of the peace holds true through the entire thing, I particularly like the lines [The Amazon afraid to right least she tear the world apart] . It explains completely on it's own what it is about, while holding more true to the wording style of your other pieces.