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Distance love
Hey there stranger
at the other end of this conversation.
I told you to go and look for love somewhere else.
I told you to stay positive and not feel guilty.
Why did you stay~?
Hey there friend
at the other end.
Didn't I tell you I need physical touch~?
And didn't I tell you to fall out of love~?
Why did I stay~?
Hey there crush...
slowly making me blush.
Why are you so perfect but yet so imperfect~?
How did you see past my flaws and still love me~?
Why did we stay~?
Hey there... lover
there is more to discover...
Why did I fall in love with you~?
Why does you God make it so hard for us~?
When will you come~?
Hey there boyfriend
Literature
Lover's Memories
A little luck is all I ask,
And maybe a wish, or two,
That will guide me from this barren land,
And take me home to you.
A single hope, or perhaps a dream
That drives me rather mad,
Drowns my mind, and breaks my soul;
And makes my heart quite sad.
It screams into eternity,
Far beyond that sabel void.
Into a land where only silence falls,
Within a hailstorm of noise.
So clasp it tight, that little hope;
Until the fracas fades to none.
Forget the weeks, the months, the years,
That we had til you were gone.
Let it burn, and drift away.
Let the ash so turn to dust
To drift across that desert still,
Within the memory of us.
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My Promises To You
I promise to always love you
Today and every day that follows
I am handing you my heart
May it go wherever yours goes
I promise to never leave you
I will stand forever by your side
There's nothing that can break us
When our hearts are intertwined
I promise that in our dying days
When nothing is as it was before
Not only will I still love you
I will love you even more
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It's very clashy. The visuals, oddly, the sexual based ones more than the weapon mention, are almost.... too blunt? There's just something about it that is lacking the usual ghost-like mystery/beauty of your other work.
Aside from that, the conflicted nature of the peace holds true through the entire thing, I particularly like the lines [The Amazon afraid to right least she tear the world apart] . It explains completely on it's own what it is about, while holding more true to the wording style of your other pieces.
Aside from that, the conflicted nature of the peace holds true through the entire thing, I particularly like the lines [The Amazon afraid to right least she tear the world apart] . It explains completely on it's own what it is about, while holding more true to the wording style of your other pieces.